195 Powerful Verbs That’ll Spice Up Your Writing

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Powerful verbs list image 1Do you ever wonder why a grammatically correct sentence you’ve written just lies there like a dead fish?

I sure have.

Your sentence might even be full of those adjectives and adverbs your teachers and loved ones so admired in your writing when you were a kid.

But still the sentence doesn’t work.

Something simple I learned from The Elements of Style years ago changed the way I write and added verve to my prose. The authors of that little bible of style said: “Write with nouns and verbs, not with adjectives and adverbs.”

Even Mark Twain was quoted, regarding adjectives: “When in doubt, strike it out.”

That’s not to say there’s no place for adjectives. I used three in the title and first paragraph of this post alone.

The point is that good writing is more about well-chosen nouns and powerful verbs than it is about adjectives and adverbs, regardless what you were told as a kid.

There’s no quicker win for you and your manuscript than ferreting out and eliminating flabby verbs and replacing them with vibrant ones.

How To Know Which Verbs Need Replacing

Your first hint is your own discomfort with a sentence. Odds are it features a snooze-inducing verb.

As you hone your ferocious self-editing skills, train yourself to exploit opportunities to replace a weak verb for a strong one.

At the end of this post I suggest a list of 195 powerful verbs you can experiment with to replace tired ones.

What constitutes a tired verb? Here’s what to look for:

3 Types of Verbs to Beware of in Your Prose

1. State-of-being verbs

These are passive as opposed to powerful:

  • Is
  • Am
  • Are
  • Was
  • Were
  • Be
  • Being
  • Been
  • Have
  • Has
  • Had
  • Do
  • Does
  • Did
  • Shall
  • Will
  • Should
  • Would
  • May
  • Might
  • Must
  • Can
  • Could

Am I saying these should never appear in your writing? Of course not. You’ll find them in this piece. But when a sentence lies limp, you can bet it contains at least one of these. Determining when a state-of-being verb is the culprit creates a problem—and finding a better, more powerful verb to replace it—is what makes us writers. [Note how I replaced the state-of-being verbs in this paragraph.]

Resist the urge to consult a thesaurus for the most exotic verb you can find. I consult such references only for the normal word that carries power but refuses to come to mind.

I would suggest even that you consult my list of powerful verbs only after you have exhausted all efforts to come up with one on your own. You want Make your prose to be your own creation, not yours plus Roget or Webster or Jenkins. [See how easy they are to spot and fix?]

Examples

Impotent: The man was walking on the platform.

Powerful: The man strode along the platform.

 

Impotent: Jim is a lover of country living.

Powerful: Jim treasures country living.

 

Impotent: There are three things that make me feel the way I do…

Powerful: Three things convince me…

 

2. Verbs that rely on adverbs

Powerful verbs are strong enough to stand alone.

Examples

The fox ran quickly dashed through the forest.

She menacingly looked glared at her rival.

He secretly listened eavesdropped while they discussed their plans.

 

3. Verbs with -ing suffixes

Examples

Before: He was walking…

After: He walked…

 

Before: She was loving the idea of…

After: She loved the idea of…

 

Before: The family was starting to gather…

After: The family started to gather…

The List of 195 Powerful Verbs

  • Advance
  • Advise
  • Alter
  • Amend
  • Amplify
  • Attack
  • Balloon
  • Bash
  • Batter
  • Beam
  • Beef
  • Blab
  • Blast
  • Bolt
  • Boost
  • Brief
  • Burst
  • Bus
  • Bust
  • Capture
  • Catch
  • Charge
  • Chap
  • Chip
  • Clasp
  • Climb
  • Clutch
  • Collide
  • Command
  • Crackle
  • Crash
  • Crush
  • Dash
  • Demolish
  • Depart
  • Deposit
  • Detect
  • Deviate
  • Devour
  • Direct
  • Discern
  • Discover
  • Drain
  • Drip
  • Drop
  • Eavesdrop
  • Engulf
  • Enlarge
  • Ensnare
  • Erase
  • Escort
  • Expand
  • Explode
  • Explore
  • Expose
  • Extend
  • Extract
  • Eyeball
  • Fish
  • Frown
  • Gaze
  • Glare
  • Glisten
  • Glitter
  • Gobble
  • Govern
  • Grasp
  • Grip
  • Groan
  • Growl
  • Guide
  • Hail
  • Heighten
  • Hurry
  • Ignite
  • Illuminate
  • Inspect
  • Instruct
  • Intensify
  • Intertwine
  • Impart
  • Journey
  • Lash
  • Lead
  • Leap
  • Locate
  • Magnify
  • Moan
  • Modify
  • Multiply
  • Mushroom
  • Mystify
  • Notice
  • Notfiy
  • Obtain
  • Oppress
  • Order
  • Paint
  • Park
  • Peck
  • Peek
  • Peer
  • Perceive
  • Picture
  • Pilot
  • Pinpoint
  • Place
  • Plant
  • Plop
  • Poison
  • Pop
  • Position
  • Power
  • Prickle
  • Probe
  • Prune
  • Realize
  • Recite
  • Recoil
  • Refashion
  • Refine
  • Remove
  • Report
  • Retreat
  • Reveal
  • Revolutionize
  • Revolve
  • Rip
  • Rise
  • Ruin
  • Rush
  • Rust
  • Scan
  • Scrape
  • Scratch
  • Scrawl
  • Seize
  • Serve
  • Shatter
  • Shepherd
  • Shimmer
  • Shine
  • Shock
  • Shrivel
  • Sizzle
  • Skip
  • Slash
  • Slide
  • Slip
  • Slurp
  • Smash
  • Snag
  • Snarl
  • Snowball
  • Soar
  • Sparkle
  • Sport
  • Stare
  • Steal
  • Steer
  • Storm
  • Strain
  • Stretch
  • Strip
  • Stroll
  • Struggle
  • Stumble
  • Supercharge
  • Supersize
  • Surge
  • Survey
  • Swell
  • Swipe
  • Swoon
  • Tail
  • Tattle
  • Transfigure
  • Transform
  • Travel
  • Treat
  • Trim
  • Uncover
  • Unearth
  • Untangle
  • Unveil
  • Usher
  • Veil
  • Weave
  • Wind
  • Withdraw
  • Wreck
  • Wrench
  • Wrest
  • Wrestle
  • Wring

Click here or below to download a PDF version of the list, along with the three types of verbs to beware of in your writing:

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Suggest in the comments three (only) powerful verbs that should be added to my list.

 

  • Another excellent post Jerry, filled with practical and easy to apply gems!

    1. Arrange

    2. Hobble

    3. Slump

  • MaryAnn Smith

    How about…
    1. gleam
    2. grope
    3. hasten

  • R Frederick Riddle

    Thanks Jerry! This is a powerful list. It will spice up my writing!

  • Rebekah gulped. “How much I have to learn.”
    Rebekah griped. “What? Pitch the thesaurus?!”
    Rebekah groveled. “Thank you, thank you for a golden post! Every writer should be so blessed with such teaching!”
    Lol

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      Ha!

  • Platform Risers

    Three more? How about:
    Nurse
    Tangle
    Wince

  • Terrie Todd

    chug, dance, sneer. How do you feel about “verbing” nouns? I love them when done well. “He elbowed his way between them.” “She cradled his head.” I guess those are old examples.

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      Some work and some don’t. Those do. Thanks, Terrie.

  • Rosemarie H

    How about squat, squiggle, squirm?

    I know what you mean about consulting a thesaurus. It’s so tempting!

    What about, “Make your prose to be your own creation, not yours plus Roget or Webster or Jenkins”? It seems “Make your prose your own creation, not yours plus Roget or Webster or Jenkins” sounds better. Correct me if I’m wrong. 😀

    Thank you for this teaching!

    • Rosemarie H

      OK, I first read this in your email and you forgot to strikethrough it there. So I got my answer! 😁

      • Jerry B Jenkins

        Sorry. The email should be an exact duplicate of the post, but for some reason the email system doesn’t accommodate the strikethrough. The team and I always have to be vigilant about not letting these leak through. I find crossouts so helpful…unless they don’t survive. Then they’re nothing but nuisances.

  • Big Shirl

    dispute – wrangle – contest

  • Tony

    Ooh – OOOH! This is too much fun!!!

    Okay, here are some VERY SPECIFIC VERBS and their ACTION
    1: anneal (to heat glass metals, etc., and cool slowly to prevent brittleness)
    2. proselytize (to try to make a convert of)
    3. garble (to distort or confuse a story)

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      Yes, it IS fun. I wouldn’t use one people have to look up though (as I did #1), unless you use it in a context that makes the meaning immediately clear.

      • Tony

        Wait….? you replied to me? YOU REPLIED TO ME!!!! AH!!! (geeking out, blushing, and gushing right now!!) Thank you so much for the advice. I’ll be sure to have context all over the place

        • Jerry B Jenkins

          Aw, dry yer eyes. :)

  • Warren A Johnson

    Not enough f words; flung, flew, fought

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      Scared me there for a second, Warren. :)

      • Warren A Johnson

        no harm intended… glad you survived!

  • cower, careen, carouse

  • Greg

    Oh wow… Here are a few 21st century Internet verbs:

    phish – Alice phished Greg, trying to steal his bank account number.
    hack – Bob hacked a quick and dirty patch to plug the security hole.
    pwned – Alice pwned Greg after fooling Greg into giving her his credentials. [pwned is cyber-slang for kind-of-like-owned and it’s becoming a mainstream word.]
    invade – Attackers invaded my computer and pwned me.
    spam – both a noun and verb; Alice spammed one million victims.
    inject – Alice injected bad code into the script, rendering it useless.
    disassemble – John disassembled the program and marveled at the creative hacks he found.
    fork – to take a new direction, inspired by fork in the road – We want to fork this software to add our own new features.

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      Nice!

  • Theodore Frank

    clench…stiffen…twist

  • Rob Mahon

    Strike
    Carve
    Glide

  • Jessie MacIntosh

    Three active verbs?
    1: Drag
    2: Plunge
    3: Trip

  • Susan DeLay

    bolster, drive, tackle

  • lynnbaber

    Revitalize
    Grope
    Nurdle

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      1–You don’t want one people have to look up.

      2–When you DO look it up, turns out ‘nurdle’ is a noun. (But it’s still fun to say). :)

      • lynnbaber

        Nurdle exists elsewhere? Something else I learned today. I’ve used nurdle as a verb for years and been accused of making it up. In context it works quite well and others have picked it up for themselves. Thanks for the update.

        • Jerry B Jenkins

          How do you use and define it as a verb? Maybe we can make it a crusade. :)

          • lynnbaber

            Nurdle – loosely, to browse. I use it when referring to horses – not in the least bit hungry – who pretend to be busy investigating different bits of grass or other green things in the pasture. They are lazily engaged in entertaining themselves. Once folks get it in their mind they begin using it when referring to the same or other horse behaviors – and teen agers.

            Important element: pretending purpose for entertainment value or simply to mess with owners or parents.

            Love crusades.

  • Kristine Brown MTY

    Trudge!

  • Jack Popjes

    Lurk, Skulk, Sneak

  • someonesgrandma

    Just reading the words inspires scenarios…
    Loiter
    Slink
    Saunter

  • Natalie

    You have 195 and only ask for 3 more? You will end up with 198 and drive all the OCD people out here nuts. Linger, Hover and I ran out of time. Gotta get into the guild for the after hours with Jerry.

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      I would end up with 198 if the only ones I added were from one person. Dozens and dozens have suggested their three, and almost all of those are different, so there’ll be way more than 198. And I AM one of those OCD people, so it’ll probably end up being a total divisible by three.

  • I love this. Here are 3:
    Brood
    Tussle
    Absorb

  • Mo Nagle

    transpire
    travail
    gush

  • Karen Crider

    Love this. Such sage advice. But as a poet I love to slum through words that rhyme, shimmer and add depth. Except when I am being lazy, when I want to lounge in passivity, yet desire company. Then I invite words that must, may, can, shall, might, was, am, is, are, to come visit. I would feel bad to leave them out, just cause they live in a state of being on the wrong side of the tracks. It’s like picking your friends, I like a full menu.

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      Agree, and as I pointed out, I used a lot of those in the post itself.

  • Louise Goulet Willis

    reverberate, scamper, pluck

  • Mariam Grace

    Wail
    Broadcast
    Proclaim

  • Dev Beerachee

    Great support. Thanks. Mine are : starve, crave , sprinkle

    • Tammy Koschnitzke

      I sense a theme . . . .

      • Jerry B Jenkins

        Ha!

  • DannieHawley

    Thanks, Jerry! I made this post into a document to keep open as I edit today…and every day from now on. I’ll review the “avoid” before I start each editing session to have them in mind. Then, if I can’t come up with a power verb, I’ll toggle over to check your list. Much appreciated lesson.

  • Manda Rusk Newlin

    FUN! My three:
    Launch
    Lurch
    Scorch

  • Donna Stearns

    Administer, Gravitate, Jostle

  • Cassandra Malone

    Download, Engage, Process

  • Holly Isaacs

    My young daughter has a favorite verb. Defenestration.
    Meaning – Throwing a person or thing out a window. It can also mean – a usually swift dismissal or expulsion (as from a political party or office) the defenestration of political leaders, but where is the fun in that.

    • Jerry B Jenkins

      That IS a fun word, Holly, but the downside is that most readers would be forced to stop and look it up.

      • Holly Isaacs

        The word could be used in a way that would help give away the definition. I’ve seen quite a few authors using the word juxtapose. I had to look up that word. As long as large or unusual words are not overused, I don’t mind looking them up and learning something new.

        • Jerry B Jenkins

          I don’t either; in fact with Kindle it takes only a keystroke or two. But research shows most readers won’t do it. I don’t like the idea of dumbing down our prose either, so context is crucial. In the case of the word in question, I would use it in dialogue and have that character or another make it clear. Like:

          “You know Senator Johnson was defenestrated from the party.”

          “Seriously? They threw him out?”

  • Tammy Koschnitzke

    Wash, Fuse, Mint- mining terms in my manuscript.

  • Terri Cannon

    Cower, Dangle, Muse

  • Loved the list. As always, you stretch our minds and ignite our creativity. See? I’m already using them. :)

  • I would add toddle, envelop, and mimic.

  • Sandra Isom

    Thanks for doing them in alphabetical order! Love them all! But it drives me crazy that you don’t have any y’s or z’s! X’s I can understand, but no y’s or z’s? Did you do that on purpose?
    Yank, Zing, and Zap

    • Uh, yeah, that’s the ticket. It was on purpose because I was hoping you’d suggest some. Thanks, Sandra! :)

  • Glenda

    Zoom, zig-zag, zip! Love the list and all the additions. :)

  • Karen Crider

    Love this. So many times the verb I’m trying to reach is out to lunch, taking a nap, or perhaps in the sauna. Anyway, it seems that way sometimes. It can’t be reached. And it takes a lot of patience waiting for it show up in my mind; especially, those with a resume. (This word, resume, needs an accent. Maybe it should be kept in the South.) The word, resume refers to a work record. And great verbs carry that with them. I love descriptive words like, frowzy.( I used that today in a poem.) Frowzy is a word unlike most words, that doesn’t need a strong verb to carry it to full garb. But I love how strong verbs added with descriptive terms grant a stronger meaning– one that can eke out sights, smells, touch, hearing, and even tasting. Frowzy does that.The word even sounds like a smell. That’s why I love this list. That’s why I love verbs that stay after school permanently. Something I been doing all my life.

  • step

    Hello Sir ,

    You overwhelmed me by this post . But , there is problem . In this post , you mentioned one point in 1 no. – state-of being verb . I practice as you say . But all times it is tough to replace auxiliary verb with power words , especially for future time or on the going time . Generally we use “will , shall” in future , “was, were” in past . But How can I replace that auxiliary verb with power words those times , future and past ?